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Jen Cannon's avatar

Love all of this, such great storytelling. GenX me especially appreciates "goes" which I've tried explaining to my GenZ daughters, and yeah, they don't understand or care.

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Stephanie Austin's avatar

YES. Goes!

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Jolene Thibodeaux's avatar

This was a tight write- string storytelling- gave me a headache in a good way - like I got drunk and married my guitar playing neighbor in Vegas and got an annulment the next day-don’t give up - I work for a small press - most of us underpublished writers and editors- all very busy and happy we stuck with the craft- it is a strange calling- revision work regarding forward movement always - it seems- part and parcel

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Samara's avatar

loved it. especially this part:

“Where are your shoes?”

We both look down at my bare feet.

“I’m getting married,” I respond.

“That’s a really bad idea,” she says.

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lchristopher's avatar

As someone who traveled to Bennington [enroute to Montreal, somehow] to wander the commons Bret Easton Ellis had made mention of in The Rules of Attraction, you have my attention.

Every building there was unlocked at the time, all lights were on. There were no students anywhere. It was surreal.

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Stephanie Austin's avatar

Good old Camden!

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lchristopher's avatar

Bwahahaha. Students with the unironic unassuming character names like Vanden & Stash. STASH. I mean, he had already used "Rip" in LTZ, but Jesusss.

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Kristine Langley Mahler's avatar

I love this flash--and I love that you are BRINGING IT BACK INTO THE LIGHT (but I also can't wait for the second part haha)

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Stephanie Austin's avatar

Ha! I hope it won’t disappoint!

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Anne Driscoll's avatar

Cigarette for a dollar! Love this!

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Stephanie Austin's avatar

This was back when cig packs were less than $3 so she was making a killing in that bathroom.

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